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1 Great Pyr Am Bulldog Pups on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:31 pm

Sweetened

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To non farm homes.  Ads can be found here and here.



Last edited by Sweetened on Thu Oct 17, 2013 9:01 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : had the same link twice. Male has been added)

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2 Re: Great Pyr Am Bulldog Pups on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:44 pm

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What a beautifully worded ad, Sweetened.

If I may make a suggestion, to clarify information in your ad you may want to change your word 'stalky' to 'stocky'. The first means tall and thin or one who is prone to stalking their prey. I think the word you want is 'stocky' which means heavyset.

If my unasked for comment is irritating, I will apologize in advance and you can blame the teacher in me. I am not prone to correcting people but in this case your meaning is changed and I don't think you want that.

3 Re: Great Pyr Am Bulldog Pups on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:51 pm

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Schipperkesue wrote:What a beautifully worded ad, Sweetened.

If I may make a suggestion, to clarify information in your ad you may want to change your word 'stalky' to 'stocky'.  The first means tall and thin or one who is prone to stalking their prey.  I think the word you want is 'stocky' which means heavyset.  

If my unasked for comment is irritating, I will apologize in advance and  you can blame the teacher in me.  I am not prone to correcting people but in this case your meaning is changed and I don't think you want that.
GAH! Thanks for this. I hate misusing words like that. I will adjust that, you're the best!

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4 Re: Great Pyr Am Bulldog Pups on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:58 pm

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Phew! Cool 

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